99劍王還能再讓人無言嗎 - 布袋戲
By Frederica
at 2021-09-01T21:45
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真的是....從糟糕變成難以理解。
[還是防雷一下]
好，墨雪就這樣被殺了，
而且從他師父那樣子看起來應該是真的死透了。
然後兇手99，
在殺了墨雪後用墨雪的血代替他簽名。
？？？？？？？？？？？？
編劇是想說反正墨雪就是出劍應戰了所以有無簽名沒差？
然後再補上劇情，
因為天璇找了藥材幫99爸延命到99歲，
所以99決定以七王的名義幫他殺七個人。
？？？？？？？？？？？？
啊就直接呈現因為恩情所以當殺手就好了啊！！
加上個只挑劍客還一定要有簽名儀式的設定幹嘛？！
前面還特別鋪陳強調一堆挑戰強者劍客的設定，
(而且比他弱的除非直接廢功不用劍不然就是被他砍死)
但事實上就只是因為恩情在殺別人指定的對象，
跟什麼挑戰強者劍客完全無關啊！
著名的契訶夫法則：
「請將一切與故事無關的事物都從故事中移除。
如果你說第一幕中有把槍掛在牆上，
那麼在第二幕或者第三幕中這把槍必須發射，
不然就沒必要掛在那。」
目前99那些有的沒的設定，
就是編劇很努力掛在牆上的槍，
但是沒有好好的擊發而是直接膛炸！
中二情懷的設定，
運用呈現的好是會讓人熱血沸騰到可以無視劇情合理；
但是運用呈現的爛就只有各種屁孩煩躁感！
99一堆設定但在劇中呈現的莫名其妙就是這樣。
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[還是防雷一下]
好，墨雪就這樣被殺了，
而且從他師父那樣子看起來應該是真的死透了。
然後兇手99，
在殺了墨雪後用墨雪的血代替他簽名。
？？？？？？？？？？？？
編劇是想說反正墨雪就是出劍應戰了所以有無簽名沒差？
然後再補上劇情，
因為天璇找了藥材幫99爸延命到99歲，
所以99決定以七王的名義幫他殺七個人。
？？？？？？？？？？？？
啊就直接呈現因為恩情所以當殺手就好了啊！！
加上個只挑劍客還一定要有簽名儀式的設定幹嘛？！
前面還特別鋪陳強調一堆挑戰強者劍客的設定，
(而且比他弱的除非直接廢功不用劍不然就是被他砍死)
但事實上就只是因為恩情在殺別人指定的對象，
跟什麼挑戰強者劍客完全無關啊！
著名的契訶夫法則：
「請將一切與故事無關的事物都從故事中移除。
如果你說第一幕中有把槍掛在牆上，
那麼在第二幕或者第三幕中這把槍必須發射，
不然就沒必要掛在那。」
目前99那些有的沒的設定，
就是編劇很努力掛在牆上的槍，
但是沒有好好的擊發而是直接膛炸！
中二情懷的設定，
運用呈現的好是會讓人熱血沸騰到可以無視劇情合理；
但是運用呈現的爛就只有各種屁孩煩躁感！
99一堆設定但在劇中呈現的莫名其妙就是這樣。
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