各位板上高手,想請教劍雨與一部韓國電影場景 - 編劇

By Hedda
at 2011-09-22T15:58
at 2011-09-22T15:58
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大家好,我是個剛接觸編劇的初學者
最近看到兩部電影
一部是<劍雨>,另一部是韓國奉俊昊導演的懸疑驚悚片(怕劇透所以不寫片名^^")
對於其中兩個場景非常好奇,真的很想知道表達的方法
買了不少書,也參考大陸那邊的編劇書籍
但我還是找不到相關的資料,所以來這邊想請益板上的編劇們^^
<劍雨>:
三個殺手坐在客棧聊天,大S就跑出來對曾靜說,她跟蹤江阿生看見他有多沒出息
之類的話。在客棧對話中穿插她跟蹤江阿生的鏡頭。
<韓國電影>:
一個智商有缺陷的男主角,跟蹤一個女學生,電影前面只演出說他跟蹤女學生,
然後女學生在暗處用石頭丟他,然後他生氣的把石頭丟回去暗處,(中間劇情沒演)
直接跳到他拍拍屁股離開。
但到電影結束前,這段劇情又開始重演,他跟蹤女學生,女學生丟他石頭,他生氣的把
石頭丟回去暗處,但這次多了前段沒講的( 中間劇情),最後他拍拍屁股離開。
請問這在劇本上
到底該用什麼樣的方式表達呢??
謝謝各位編劇^^"
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