玄蒙記霹靂依舊!有期待會受內傷! - 布袋戲

By Leila
at 2023-01-21T06:47
at 2023-01-21T06:47
Table of Contents
前面的有多爛就別說的
我是爛到只看頭看尾就關掉
新檔玄蒙記說回歸武俠本以所期待
結果..呵呵
玄蒙記OP前武戲先不提
玄蒙記正篇開始
本以為是要營造進入一個新境地的新遭遇
本以為開始的措手不及是因為新境地特殊規則造就
結果..還是老套-劍氣解決+ 你媽的密教咒術
看到這樣的開頭不禁...
幹..你乾脆將寰界寫成類日式陰陽師世界這樣也許還有所賣點
整個寰界起手式完全是對岸玄幻文看太多+扛不起世界設定亂寫一通
起手式用西方玄幻口吻寫、"怪"又用密教+日式陰陽師混搭硬奏
正篇啟動還是中原武林寫法
劇情又開始玩起少男少女富二代情懷
劇情通篇詭異寫法
個人覺得式亂搭四不像二流寫法
整個看起來亂七八糟
而且新登場都愛裝逼...
失望
也許就是因為寰界亂七八糟
所以編劇才會寫得這麼奇怪吧!
編劇也許就是想就由亂七八糟亂搭手法
來表示寰界的混亂奇詭吧!
如果是這樣才導致第一集看得這麼不舒服
應該能說編劇是成功的!
因為編劇確實讓觀眾感覺到混亂不舒服
如果是這樣玄蒙記的寰界開篇成功
只是期待不起來就是了
拉基開頭能有美好接續是很考驗作者功力的
這種逆流寫法實在是太特殊了
特殊到讓人傻眼!
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我是爛到只看頭看尾就關掉
新檔玄蒙記說回歸武俠本以所期待
結果..呵呵
玄蒙記OP前武戲先不提
玄蒙記正篇開始
本以為是要營造進入一個新境地的新遭遇
本以為開始的措手不及是因為新境地特殊規則造就
結果..還是老套-劍氣解決+ 你媽的密教咒術
看到這樣的開頭不禁...
幹..你乾脆將寰界寫成類日式陰陽師世界這樣也許還有所賣點
整個寰界起手式完全是對岸玄幻文看太多+扛不起世界設定亂寫一通
起手式用西方玄幻口吻寫、"怪"又用密教+日式陰陽師混搭硬奏
正篇啟動還是中原武林寫法
劇情又開始玩起少男少女富二代情懷
劇情通篇詭異寫法
個人覺得式亂搭四不像二流寫法
整個看起來亂七八糟
而且新登場都愛裝逼...
失望
也許就是因為寰界亂七八糟
所以編劇才會寫得這麼奇怪吧!
編劇也許就是想就由亂七八糟亂搭手法
來表示寰界的混亂奇詭吧!
如果是這樣才導致第一集看得這麼不舒服
應該能說編劇是成功的!
因為編劇確實讓觀眾感覺到混亂不舒服
如果是這樣玄蒙記的寰界開篇成功
只是期待不起來就是了
拉基開頭能有美好接續是很考驗作者功力的
這種逆流寫法實在是太特殊了
特殊到讓人傻眼!
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