華燈初上真的塞了太多沒必要的東西 - 臺劇
By George
at 2022-03-22T02:56
at 2022-03-22T02:56
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剛看完全三季,
先完全不論動機或是什麼合理性,我是屬於包容性很高的觀眾(笑)
但真的很講一下節奏的問題。
從第二集開始就開始越看越煩燥,
無數次感覺劇情就要開始推進了,
結果整個跳出來一段又一段的回憶把節奏又拉慢
就整個二三季就在這種 "鋪陳-準備高潮-跳出節奏的回憶或支線"之下一直迴圈
假設是重要的回憶沒有關系,但是太多時候這些東西不補給觀眾知道
對劇情發展好像也沒有太大影響;
或是你在前期鋪我也覺得合理,但是後面再鋪前面的東西就讓人感覺煩燥了。
還是來防一下雷,
=====防雷線====
舉幾個例子:
第一季看完其實就知道Sue和Rose是從學生時代的好朋友了,而且是超級好姐妹,
但是第二季卻後面補了一大堆兒時劇情,還是在現實生活線他們吵最兇的時候,
你不用補這些我也知道他們是好姐妹啊,劇情需要補一點就算了,但是整整補了一、兩集
裡面除了秀出朱文雄有多渣之外其它好像對劇情真的沒什麼幫助
第三季也是補了超多牢裡的劇情、我們第一季就已經知道Rose在牢裡和花子很好了…
演那麼一大堆出來好像也沒有證明到什麼?
阿達和成哥也是,不是說不能補他小時候,但都補在一些劇情快高潮的地方,
第一季或第二季早就建立他們的關系了,
現在又補一大段小時候成哥照顧菜鳥仔我也是滿頭問號
前面幾集每個角色都慢慢在收線的時候我真的覺得愛子和何予恩白天講完拼圖也收完了
結果後面劇情正緊張的時候又弄出二三段、我真的不關心王愛蓮媽媽或是他是旁不旁聽啊
我要看成哥抓人問話啊!
毒品線鋪超久鋪了二季+半季,這麼大的事真的很期待收掉會有種
哇!大快人心的感覺
結果第三季收尾的大概幾個畫面五分鐘就收完了,
真的讓人覺得有種"蛤?就這樣!?"的感覺。
第三季除了交叉問話那邊看的滿過癮的其它時間都覺得平平,
剩下的東西大家感覺也討論到爛了,
花了太多時間在對劇情推進沒幫助的角色身上,
中村先生出場時間超多但觀眾應該十分鐘就懂阿季和Sue的戰爭了、
Sugar整間店就算沒開對劇情好像也沒太大差別
檜木一開始感覺很重要但最後變跑龍套、
局長露出真面目的時候以為後面會有很多他的戲份,結果刮完鬍子就沒了。
等等等等
我覺得很可惜,如果能夠只剪二季就好應該會非常非常好看QQ
不知道有沒有人和我有一樣的感覺?
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先完全不論動機或是什麼合理性,我是屬於包容性很高的觀眾(笑)
但真的很講一下節奏的問題。
從第二集開始就開始越看越煩燥,
無數次感覺劇情就要開始推進了,
結果整個跳出來一段又一段的回憶把節奏又拉慢
就整個二三季就在這種 "鋪陳-準備高潮-跳出節奏的回憶或支線"之下一直迴圈
假設是重要的回憶沒有關系,但是太多時候這些東西不補給觀眾知道
對劇情發展好像也沒有太大影響;
或是你在前期鋪我也覺得合理,但是後面再鋪前面的東西就讓人感覺煩燥了。
還是來防一下雷,
=====防雷線====
舉幾個例子:
第一季看完其實就知道Sue和Rose是從學生時代的好朋友了,而且是超級好姐妹,
但是第二季卻後面補了一大堆兒時劇情,還是在現實生活線他們吵最兇的時候,
你不用補這些我也知道他們是好姐妹啊,劇情需要補一點就算了,但是整整補了一、兩集
裡面除了秀出朱文雄有多渣之外其它好像對劇情真的沒什麼幫助
第三季也是補了超多牢裡的劇情、我們第一季就已經知道Rose在牢裡和花子很好了…
演那麼一大堆出來好像也沒有證明到什麼?
阿達和成哥也是,不是說不能補他小時候,但都補在一些劇情快高潮的地方,
第一季或第二季早就建立他們的關系了,
現在又補一大段小時候成哥照顧菜鳥仔我也是滿頭問號
前面幾集每個角色都慢慢在收線的時候我真的覺得愛子和何予恩白天講完拼圖也收完了
結果後面劇情正緊張的時候又弄出二三段、我真的不關心王愛蓮媽媽或是他是旁不旁聽啊
我要看成哥抓人問話啊!
毒品線鋪超久鋪了二季+半季,這麼大的事真的很期待收掉會有種
哇!大快人心的感覺
結果第三季收尾的大概幾個畫面五分鐘就收完了,
真的讓人覺得有種"蛤?就這樣!?"的感覺。
第三季除了交叉問話那邊看的滿過癮的其它時間都覺得平平,
剩下的東西大家感覺也討論到爛了,
花了太多時間在對劇情推進沒幫助的角色身上,
中村先生出場時間超多但觀眾應該十分鐘就懂阿季和Sue的戰爭了、
Sugar整間店就算沒開對劇情好像也沒太大差別
檜木一開始感覺很重要但最後變跑龍套、
局長露出真面目的時候以為後面會有很多他的戲份,結果刮完鬍子就沒了。
等等等等
我覺得很可惜,如果能夠只剪二季就好應該會非常非常好看QQ
不知道有沒有人和我有一樣的感覺?
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