補上這一幕就能拯救《刻在》的剪輯 - 電影

By Iris
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這部片實在是有點恨鐵不成鋼的感覺
以下是我覺得只要稍微補一下就可以挽救前面
破碎的剪輯的方式,也可以留下一點餘韻
以下是防雷頁------------>
阿漢在拜訪神父伴侶後走在城市的各個角落
與Birdy在各個景點錯過
最後來到瀑布,成年阿漢不禁拿出收音機
回放他過去寫給那個人的那首歌
旁邊的觀光客人群各自散去,
在不遠處顯現一個熟悉的身影
那個人就是成年的Birdy
在歌聲中兩人相視... 停在Birdy的臉部特寫
(這時重點來了!)
這時畫面以Birdy的視角進入了Birdy的回憶中:
原來在與大巴衝突前他曾有過阿漢被霸凌的夢境
原來在學校放了熱氣球的時候他最後的眼神其實看向了阿漢
原來在從無人島回來後Birdy鬧了家庭革命
年輕Birdy的臉這時已為成年的他複雜的表情重疊
但此時阿漢淡淡的微笑化解尷尬,與Birdy對望著,相視而笑
畫面淡出在盧廣仲的片尾曲中
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以初戀的那件小事為例
就是反過來用男主的視角來說明
其實他早就喜歡女主很久了
雖然是老套梗,但最後讓成年Birdy直接說:「我那時真的很愛你耶」
處理實在是有夠粗糙
用畫面表現不是更加有感覺嗎?
更何況最後年輕的兩個男主角尬唱整首主題曲更是意義不明
不過影片拍好也不可能重拍重剪
總覺得有點可惜了
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