陳芊芊之自己編的戲自己演 - 陸劇

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因為這篇本文下面的推文在討論小芊後來為啥又不想死之類的,說是邏輯有問題,讓兩天
刷完10集的我回去重看了一下第一集後面和第二集一開始。
以下是我的整理,有問題請指正:
小芊穿過去以後發現自己是第三集就會被毒死的女配芊芊,於是他想著自己死了就
可以穿回去,所以一心求死省略各種結婚過程直接洞房,在洞房之中韓爍說要喝酒助興。
(此時有小芊在現實生活中寫稿的畫面,且有出現電腦螢幕中的劇本,劇本內容文字其實
很簡略只說了毒酒,並未清楚描寫毒下在哪一杯或是何時下的)
https://i.imgur.com/Xt9L3O3.jpg
接著小芊就提醒自己要喝到有毒的那杯,但因為韓用玄虎的禮儀喝酒芊芊用他以為
的交杯方法喝酒所以喝酒失敗,接著韓為了順應芊的方法偷調換了酒杯要再次要乾杯,但
沒想到芊調整自己喝酒禮儀照著玄虎城的交杯禮儀了,所以喝酒又不成功。
韓此時覺得事情有異所以就倒掉有毒的酒,還假意問芊說:難不成怕我酒下毒,之後
芊就火怒起來說:有沒有毒你自己沒點數?接著叫人進來(韓本來有意用筷子插死他但來
不及)
一堆人進來後芊就兩杯酒一起喝了(之前推文有問到為什麼不兩杯一起喝?一堆人進
來前的節奏其實很快,兩人一開始也想裝一下,另外小芊其實有表現出要喝毒酒有點可怕
的猶豫,所以不選擇一下喝兩杯也是能理解的,因為他喝一杯都要鼓起勇氣喝呀!人進來
後,芊有怒氣又想拉著韓一起死,就有索性兩杯酒一起喝的畫面囉!)還吃了菜和親嘴(
這裡芊有說:韓爍把毒塗在嘴上了?還真會加戲,說明編劇認同人物能自己加戲的能力)
後來就是醒來發現自己沒死,又不敢自殺,然後又怕自己在夢中死去就是現實生活中
的過勞死會真的死掉
https://i.imgur.com/T0x1hOP.jpg
所以想到自己最後劇本的結局有天門大開這劇,想著天門大開自己就能回去了,所以就開
始致力於自己要活著將故事走回姐姐和韓爍的在一起才能結束回家的路上。
以上大概是這樣
其實順順的看下來我覺得沒有過多的bug啦
大家可以一起討論喔喔喔喔
我覺得即便是甜寵,劇情邏輯還是要統一是蠻基本的條件,不過這劇的看點可能是:在陸
劇中,他擁有清奇的設定讓人耳目一新啊
另外有人說男二為什麼是男子卻在花垣城身居高位,女君身邊的重臣是男的,現實社會中
,女總統也有男幕僚男總統也有女幕僚,所以這兩個角色雖然高位也不算是所謂的bug吧
!
而且後面其實有解釋男二的母親身份地位偉大重要所以他放這個位置也沒什麼問題(這裡
只是我的想法拜託不要戰我,這劇也不適合討論女性主義或女權因為平權絕對不是誰尊誰
卑)
另外
小芊沒有要照著芊芊的路數走,他完全就是做他自己,所以他會道歉會救人,男二也因此
愛上他,當然一點武功也不會也就不是bug了。由此可知,後面的劇情發展應該都不太是
他編劇本人可以設想到的,他應該是最清楚一開始的邏輯和人物設定而已
(這時候突然想起了鳳九魂穿阿蘭若然後還要照阿蘭若的決定走真是難為他啦)
(亂入枕上書)
話說男主好帥啊!以前沒看過趙露思,這是第一次看他表演,哭戲委屈巴巴的,笑起來又
好甜我覺得可以,另外找了三個說書先生的想法好有趣,林七雖然有點機車但真的在武試
的時候也沒有趕盡殺絕(洗白的節奏?)惟一讓我覺得煩的其實是大姐(為什麼呢?)以
下分享喜歡的劇照啦啦啦啦
https://i.imgur.com/rdhUxH0.jpg
https://i.imgur.com/fQvj9oi.jpg
https://i.imgur.com/MBLozdY.jpg
--
刷完10集的我回去重看了一下第一集後面和第二集一開始。
以下是我的整理,有問題請指正:
小芊穿過去以後發現自己是第三集就會被毒死的女配芊芊,於是他想著自己死了就
可以穿回去,所以一心求死省略各種結婚過程直接洞房,在洞房之中韓爍說要喝酒助興。
(此時有小芊在現實生活中寫稿的畫面,且有出現電腦螢幕中的劇本,劇本內容文字其實
很簡略只說了毒酒,並未清楚描寫毒下在哪一杯或是何時下的)
https://i.imgur.com/Xt9L3O3.jpg
接著小芊就提醒自己要喝到有毒的那杯,但因為韓用玄虎的禮儀喝酒芊芊用他以為
的交杯方法喝酒所以喝酒失敗,接著韓為了順應芊的方法偷調換了酒杯要再次要乾杯,但
沒想到芊調整自己喝酒禮儀照著玄虎城的交杯禮儀了,所以喝酒又不成功。
韓此時覺得事情有異所以就倒掉有毒的酒,還假意問芊說:難不成怕我酒下毒,之後
芊就火怒起來說:有沒有毒你自己沒點數?接著叫人進來(韓本來有意用筷子插死他但來
不及)
一堆人進來後芊就兩杯酒一起喝了(之前推文有問到為什麼不兩杯一起喝?一堆人進
來前的節奏其實很快,兩人一開始也想裝一下,另外小芊其實有表現出要喝毒酒有點可怕
的猶豫,所以不選擇一下喝兩杯也是能理解的,因為他喝一杯都要鼓起勇氣喝呀!人進來
後,芊有怒氣又想拉著韓一起死,就有索性兩杯酒一起喝的畫面囉!)還吃了菜和親嘴(
這裡芊有說:韓爍把毒塗在嘴上了?還真會加戲,說明編劇認同人物能自己加戲的能力)
後來就是醒來發現自己沒死,又不敢自殺,然後又怕自己在夢中死去就是現實生活中
的過勞死會真的死掉
https://i.imgur.com/T0x1hOP.jpg
所以想到自己最後劇本的結局有天門大開這劇,想著天門大開自己就能回去了,所以就開
始致力於自己要活著將故事走回姐姐和韓爍的在一起才能結束回家的路上。
以上大概是這樣
其實順順的看下來我覺得沒有過多的bug啦
大家可以一起討論喔喔喔喔
我覺得即便是甜寵,劇情邏輯還是要統一是蠻基本的條件,不過這劇的看點可能是:在陸
劇中,他擁有清奇的設定讓人耳目一新啊
另外有人說男二為什麼是男子卻在花垣城身居高位,女君身邊的重臣是男的,現實社會中
,女總統也有男幕僚男總統也有女幕僚,所以這兩個角色雖然高位也不算是所謂的bug吧
!
而且後面其實有解釋男二的母親身份地位偉大重要所以他放這個位置也沒什麼問題(這裡
只是我的想法拜託不要戰我,這劇也不適合討論女性主義或女權因為平權絕對不是誰尊誰
卑)
另外
小芊沒有要照著芊芊的路數走,他完全就是做他自己,所以他會道歉會救人,男二也因此
愛上他,當然一點武功也不會也就不是bug了。由此可知,後面的劇情發展應該都不太是
他編劇本人可以設想到的,他應該是最清楚一開始的邏輯和人物設定而已
(這時候突然想起了鳳九魂穿阿蘭若然後還要照阿蘭若的決定走真是難為他啦)
(亂入枕上書)
話說男主好帥啊!以前沒看過趙露思,這是第一次看他表演,哭戲委屈巴巴的,笑起來又
好甜我覺得可以,另外找了三個說書先生的想法好有趣,林七雖然有點機車但真的在武試
的時候也沒有趕盡殺絕(洗白的節奏?)惟一讓我覺得煩的其實是大姐(為什麼呢?)以
下分享喜歡的劇照啦啦啦啦
https://i.imgur.com/rdhUxH0.jpg
https://i.imgur.com/fQvj9oi.jpg
https://i.imgur.com/MBLozdY.jpg
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