類似感覺 - 三立

By Joe
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這幾天補看真情橋段(67-83)
不得不說,南喬真好看,雖然兩人成型很短
聰明v.s小喬見面67集,成型83集
但是兩人感情線應該算從73才正式開始吧...
聰明對小喬:推薦聰明吃巧克力慢慢影響他(73)
看到這裡讓我想到家和的小祖,也是先從不一樣的價值觀受影響開始
慢慢潛移默化......。
(看來編劇戲路一樣,都是先從一個與我不同的價值觀開始受啟發)
小喬對聰明:應該是79集開始吧(聰明吻她開始)
看到這個也讓我想到家和的艾琳,不論是寶琳、祖琳時期
女角都會回想到一些與男角的親密動作..然後在看到男角的用心
慢慢受到感動而愛上。
南喬橋段中還經歷了小喬的生世梗,79-83兩人成型,才五集耶!
但是久愉編鋪得很好,雙方心路歷程明確(從一開始的利用到真心喜歡)
一開始接近她是為了騙選票,到為了美人放棄江山,
把自己選票全部灌給小喬(這一段回顧畫面有感動到我)
不會覺得這一對就突然莫名其妙相愛了。
然後我就感覺,這一檔(世間情)好像對於感情轉折的內心戲並不多耶
峰娟也好,智妮也是
尤其是珊妮,她在感情上受過傷,而且還是重傷
她有辦法那麼快接受另一段感情嗎??
她都不會害怕孫檢不會是另一個展裕嗎? 不合理嘛
(有時候我真的覺得很奇怪,既然要撐2個小時45分鐘
那時間很多呀! 可以多鋪陳幾個情節、橋段,讓角色性格鮮明一點
把配對寫的合理一點、細膩一點壓,清楚交代雙方感情心路歷程,
既不突兀又不會產生違和感,又可以撐時間,不好嗎?
編劇如果你們是新手,那建議你們去參考之前幾檔編劇的作品好嗎?
看看人家感情戲是甚麼鋪陳的,最少該做到配對合理
否則看了實在很阿雜
不知道為什麼現在的世間情越看越有回到當初在看父母心的感覺
一整個無力感
不過父母心是靠龍慧撐到結局
現在世間情則是靠瑤婷在撐........
只能說兩個編統差異好大呀,還是說我比較適合久愉編的風格
我是不是快被淘汰了@@
p.s 剛剛看到真情一個好笑片段,貼上來給大家回味,沒看過就分享囉
真情。
那一段小喬的媽媽(宋美麗)以前酒國名花的花名是安娜
然後林雲龍、關世昌、陳瑞清對話
世昌:乾爸,你會不會認錯人? 小喬的媽媽是前任台北分社的社長
怎麼可能會是酒家小姐?
雲龍:我也是被方國強刺激才想起來,不會有錯!安娜啦!
瑞清:阿係安奈? (疑惑樣)
雲龍:就是安娜呀
瑞清:到底係安奈?
雲龍:她的名字叫安娜啦!你現在是在問安奈?
這名字取的好!!很雙關 (這個名字才有這個笑點)
這一段快把我笑死了....
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不得不說,南喬真好看,雖然兩人成型很短
聰明v.s小喬見面67集,成型83集
但是兩人感情線應該算從73才正式開始吧...
聰明對小喬:推薦聰明吃巧克力慢慢影響他(73)
看到這裡讓我想到家和的小祖,也是先從不一樣的價值觀受影響開始
慢慢潛移默化......。
(看來編劇戲路一樣,都是先從一個與我不同的價值觀開始受啟發)
小喬對聰明:應該是79集開始吧(聰明吻她開始)
看到這個也讓我想到家和的艾琳,不論是寶琳、祖琳時期
女角都會回想到一些與男角的親密動作..然後在看到男角的用心
慢慢受到感動而愛上。
南喬橋段中還經歷了小喬的生世梗,79-83兩人成型,才五集耶!
但是久愉編鋪得很好,雙方心路歷程明確(從一開始的利用到真心喜歡)
一開始接近她是為了騙選票,到為了美人放棄江山,
把自己選票全部灌給小喬(這一段回顧畫面有感動到我)
不會覺得這一對就突然莫名其妙相愛了。
然後我就感覺,這一檔(世間情)好像對於感情轉折的內心戲並不多耶
峰娟也好,智妮也是
尤其是珊妮,她在感情上受過傷,而且還是重傷
她有辦法那麼快接受另一段感情嗎??
她都不會害怕孫檢不會是另一個展裕嗎? 不合理嘛
(有時候我真的覺得很奇怪,既然要撐2個小時45分鐘
那時間很多呀! 可以多鋪陳幾個情節、橋段,讓角色性格鮮明一點
把配對寫的合理一點、細膩一點壓,清楚交代雙方感情心路歷程,
既不突兀又不會產生違和感,又可以撐時間,不好嗎?
編劇如果你們是新手,那建議你們去參考之前幾檔編劇的作品好嗎?
看看人家感情戲是甚麼鋪陳的,最少該做到配對合理
否則看了實在很阿雜
不知道為什麼現在的世間情越看越有回到當初在看父母心的感覺
一整個無力感
不過父母心是靠龍慧撐到結局
現在世間情則是靠瑤婷在撐........
只能說兩個編統差異好大呀,還是說我比較適合久愉編的風格
我是不是快被淘汰了@@
p.s 剛剛看到真情一個好笑片段,貼上來給大家回味,沒看過就分享囉
真情。
那一段小喬的媽媽(宋美麗)以前酒國名花的花名是安娜
然後林雲龍、關世昌、陳瑞清對話
世昌:乾爸,你會不會認錯人? 小喬的媽媽是前任台北分社的社長
怎麼可能會是酒家小姐?
雲龍:我也是被方國強刺激才想起來,不會有錯!安娜啦!
瑞清:阿係安奈? (疑惑樣)
雲龍:就是安娜呀
瑞清:到底係安奈?
雲龍:她的名字叫安娜啦!你現在是在問安奈?
這名字取的好!!很雙關 (這個名字才有這個笑點)
這一段快把我笑死了....
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