墨世佛劫最終回,真的很想吐槽... - 布袋戲
By Necoo
at 2015-11-26T19:44
at 2015-11-26T19:44
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昨天寫一篇很爛的心得,今天重新說一次。作文很爛,看懂就好。
分鏡運用一幕敗筆,溫皇與師相要穩住意識之後:
俏如來:缺舟前輩,請您阻止大智慧!<<<<這句台詞跟前面有很大的衝突!!!
溫皇趕到無垢之間,問俏如來你真能說服缺舟?
俏如來看到缺舟的時候,應該要說:缺舟前輩,我找到大智會理念錯誤了。
就應該在這時候用上了後面的證道之類台詞,或者直接用上您所謂修行聖地可有
圓滿得道?來去影響大智慧。雖說大智慧隔絕缺舟反面質疑這面人格,還是可以傳達證
道論述的。
還有一個最大的吐槽31集可以挖出俏如來記憶,得知魔世元邪皇資訊,還可以把這個資訊
用大師兄模樣告知師相,卻無法得知玄狐是一塊鐵精,而且玄狐已經變成人了。
而是最後俏如來用玄狐變成人證道論述,來點醒大智慧?這個起承轉合用的很差。
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分鏡運用一幕敗筆,溫皇與師相要穩住意識之後:
俏如來:缺舟前輩,請您阻止大智慧!<<<<這句台詞跟前面有很大的衝突!!!
溫皇趕到無垢之間,問俏如來你真能說服缺舟?
俏如來看到缺舟的時候,應該要說:缺舟前輩,我找到大智會理念錯誤了。
就應該在這時候用上了後面的證道之類台詞,或者直接用上您所謂修行聖地可有
圓滿得道?來去影響大智慧。雖說大智慧隔絕缺舟反面質疑這面人格,還是可以傳達證
道論述的。
還有一個最大的吐槽31集可以挖出俏如來記憶,得知魔世元邪皇資訊,還可以把這個資訊
用大師兄模樣告知師相,卻無法得知玄狐是一塊鐵精,而且玄狐已經變成人了。
而是最後俏如來用玄狐變成人證道論述,來點醒大智慧?這個起承轉合用的很差。
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推 jeffbear79: 很久很久以前,有一隻沒有故事的妖怪,他羨慕別人都05/25 21:50
→ jeffbear79: 有自己的故事。於是吃掉的別人的故事,但他發現俏如05/25 21:50
→ jeffbear79: 來被教授洗臉的故事太難吃,所以還給那個故事被吃掉05/25 21:50
→ jeffbear79: 的俏如來。爾後又因為吃到有毒故事反胃,吐出了所有故05/25 21:50
→ jeffbear79: 事。地門線完結,請小心食安問題 (05/25 21:50
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