季電FB - 布袋戲
By Susan
at 2015-08-14T16:10
at 2015-08-14T16:10
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三弦跟季電都說李白寫的不差
但我真的覺得雁王跟凰后寫得很不好
前者想學默蒼離又學不像
後者除了露奶外一點個人魅力也沒有 堪稱性格最不立體的九算
這兩個人一直被寫得「好像很強」
偏偏又無法給人深刻的印象到底強在哪
每次看到雁王長篇大論 煩躁之外更覺得邏輯不夠通順
墨世佛劫沒有墨武俠鋒好看 實在是因為這兩個主要角色不夠好
然後大智慧線又霧煞煞
只有看到飛淵開心一點
結論就是 原編劇都太謙虛了 相較之下
李白編出來的角色還是差你們一大截
※ 引述《question2 (問問問)》之銘言:
: https://goo.gl/bzWeIg
: 啊,想不到總監先說了啊,這樣會害我也想要
: 說一下,關於李白。
:
: 其實在下曾經自我評比過,若把布袋戲圈所有
: 掛名男編劇一字排開,我的創作才能,可能是
: 最低下的那一個。之所以不列女編劇,是為了
: 不讓自己的排名太難看,當然更不用說把所有
: 類型的線上編劇全部列入了。可想而知,我是
: 花了多少努力與苦心,才終於彌補了這麼大的
: 才能缺陷,寫出一些勉強能搬上檯面的作品。
:
: 所以,當我遇見李白時,那種興奮與感動,是
: 難以言喻的,當然,在確定他要離職的當下,
: 那種黯然與失落,也是不言而喻。
:
: 雖然總監叫我別這麼想,但我真心評估過,再
: 讓李白寫半年,他的成就足以超越我(雖然說
: 我其實沒什麼成就可言呵呵),然後再共事個
: 幾個月,我或許就會退出這個圈子,轉換創作
: 跑道。這件事情,我是考慮過的,畢竟我真的
: 非常討厭占著茅坑不拉屎,若才能磨盡,該退
: 則退,舞臺,該留給有才的後進繼續發揮。
:
: 令人慶幸的是,李白雖離開了編劇組,卻沒有
: 離開我們,依舊在創作路上繼續努力著,有時
: 還會跟我們分享最新創作,所以我也在此答應
: 大家,若李白之後有新作發表,我也會在第一
: 時間跟大家分享。
:
: 說完李白,講講劇情瑣事。
:
: 天地雙門的開篇角色,都是總監負責的,尤其
: 念荼羅,其實我負責的部分大多是「大智慧」
: 這個身分,而看完總監寫的念荼羅退場,我也
: 深覺自己的功夫還不到家,在我筆下,還真的
: 找不到一個真正的覺者。六根不淨?(歪頭)
:
: 欸,是誰說我對佛經、佛學、佛理有研究的?
: 其實地門部份我寫較多的是日常,辯理的部分
: 甚少,勉強能說嘴的,是缺舟放萬雪夜離開、
: 俏如來於意識中初見缺舟,而且總監都有略作
: 補充。誠然地門有些哏和橋段構想是我提供,
: 但設定人人都會,重點在於會不會寫,要真正
: 把這些元素寫成劇本,才是硬底子、真功夫。
: (望向遠方吞雲吐霧的總監)
:
: 當然,能在台詞上畫龍點睛,也是非常重要的
: 才能,這裡要出賣一下「被機關強行突破」和
: 「蝶蝶」是大俠加的,害我在校稿時差點一口
: 茶水噴在螢幕上~XD
:
: 台詞的「氣口」,也是我要精進的地方,寫到
: 現在,感觸尤深,未來,希望能更好吧。
:
: 墨世佛劫終於進入下半檔,往後的日子,還請
: 大家繼續指教。(鞠躬)
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